The Benefits of Studying Writing
The benefit
that we got from studying writing are classified into three categories. They are for our life,
academic life and society life. First, for academic life, there are so many
advantages during studying writing. There are the additional of vocabulary, the
increase of knowledge, and the process of train our self to be a good student
in writing. So, we can pass the final assignment when I am going to graduate from this University later.
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the second, for my life. Writing can make people train their brain by using
their mind to create a good writing. We can use writing skill to write our
experiences into a diary book. There were so many people who could speak but
poorly in write something. So, if I can be written something. It will help me
to share our experience with our diary book because that is the safeness on to
keep our secret beside told them to friends who could not we trust and believe
in.
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the last, for my society life. In my society life, I can use it to my basic
skill to develop my skill to train myself to be a good person and easily to get
a job in the future. In fact, there are so many people which can speak but cannot
express their idea into writing. At the result, there are so many advantages
that we can get from it and it are really useful for our life and society.
go ahead put...
BalasHapusin the second paragraph, you should change at the second become the second i thing...:)
ok iya,thanks for the comment.
HapusAlmost perfect, great job!
BalasHapusit is a good essay and I think you can develop it more better
BalasHapusnice work put
BalasHapusthanks oryn :D
Hapusit is the same as your second essay, still short. add the information more. ok :D
BalasHapusbut it is a good job. go ahead!
i have read yours in group review, your essay is better than mine._. keep writing!! :))
BalasHapusyour experience seems like me. good job
BalasHapusThat's a good essay putri. Good job.
BalasHapusgood job, tri
BalasHapusgood essay. again! clasical problem "the grammar"
BalasHapusgood essay..
BalasHapusKeeping your grammatical put :D
BalasHapusgood essay, Mulput
BalasHapusthanks guys, i really appreciate all of your comments. i trust it will be usefuL for me in my next writing works :D
BalasHapusGood job mulput
BalasHapuswhat a great essay :)
BalasHapus