My Experience during Study Paragraph Writing Last Semester
My
experience during studying paragraph writing last semester was very
interesting. There were a lot of new things that I could get from the course
such as how to make a good paragraph and how to develop our idea and express it
into a good paragraph. Eventhought, there were so many difficult things that I
still have and bother me until now. There were because of my writing skill and
my bad habits in the past. At that time, I never practiced my skill at my
boarding house. So, it was difficult for me to write something tin a short time
and found a good topic to write to express my idea into a written form. I also
wrote a paragraph without concern about what to write paragraph with unity and
coherence. At the result, people did not get what I really meant on my writing.
The
other problem that made me regret about it in last semester was my bad habits.
I used to postpone my assignments in the
deadline time. So, I was stress in the end to finish my assignments in the same
time. I hate myself who tried to postpone my works. There were also another my
bad habit. There was the lack of knowledge. I could not write something that I
did not know, I did not know because I lack of knowledge. I lack the knowledge
because I rarely read to read books. I used to watch Korean movies than trained
my skill in writing. So, I hope I will change my behavior and focus to get the
best mark at this time.
I
studied paragraph writing with Mr. Saunir and Mrs. Fitra. When I studied with
Mr. Saunir. I really like the way he
tough me. He explained everything in a easy way. Anytime I was confused about
something and asked him. He gave me the answer from my question. So, I felt
like having time with my own grandfather. On the other hand, I studied
paragraph writing with Mrs. Fitra. She is a funny teacher. He treated us not
like a student but friend sometime. I like her side like that. However, she was
really easy to change her mind when my friends argue about something. So it
made me confused me and she also a little poor to give a good mark or her
students. I wish I could get the best mark and increase my skill in writing.
well done ! I don't find any mistakes so far
BalasHapusNo new comment. Just like what i have told you before
BalasHapusi have read your essay several time,,this is great essay...
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BalasHapuskeep your ideas..:-)
BalasHapusbefore 'but' using comma...
BalasHapusdo not forget it...
nice work...go a head...
I don't know whether I am wrong or not, in the second essay, exactly in the last. I don't understand what you mean "At the result, there are so many advantages that we can get from it and it are really useful for our life and society." I think, it is too many "it".or you mean, before "and" you put "comma" but for all, it is good. :)
BalasHapuswhat a good essay. go ahead putri
BalasHapusa good essay
BalasHapusThat's a good idea put, but be carefully in punctuation.
BalasHapusover all your essay writing is good enough.
BalasHapusFor the future, it's better for you to give more support in your essay. So, your sentence will be strong.
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thanks guys ;D
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